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吕福祥(绿艾苑)对联体诗酬唱集罗志海译

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发表于 2021-6-22 21:50:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 绿艾苑 于 2021-6-22 21:54 编辑

【吕福祥(绿艾苑)对联体诗酬唱集】罗志海译
荒城野岭之二——和罗志海诗友(新韵)
树寂孤禽噪
风高月魄清
寒烟笼古道
衰草没幽亭
格律体新诗 ● 五绝吕福祥著/罗志海译
第一一七一六首对联体诗二零二一年六月四日
The Deserted City And The Wild Ridge II –Wrote A Poem After My Poetry Friend, Luo Zhihai (New Rhyme)
The tree is silent and a lone bird noises
The wind is high and the clear moon soul
The withered grass pervades the secludedpavilion
The cold smoke envelops an ancient road

(Poem by Lv Fuxiang, Translation by LuoZhihai)

附原玉:荒城野岭  文/罗志海
雪冷人踪少
花残暮色朦
曲桥连野岭
弯径入荒城

格律体新诗 ● 五绝罗志海著译
第一一六八九首对联体诗二零二一年五月二十三日
The Deserted City And The Wild Ridge

The snow is cold and few people are seen
The flowers are fading and dusk was dim
The winding bridge connects the wild ridge
The curved path leads into the desertedcity
(by Luo Zhihai)

荒城野岭之三(唱酬合璧)
树寂孤禽噪
花残暮色朦
曲桥连野岭
衰草没幽亭
雪冷人踪少
风高月魄清
寒烟笼陋店
弯径入荒城
:
第一四六七句吕福祥著
第二三五八句罗志海著
格律体新诗五律罗志海译
第一一七一七首对联体诗二零二一年六月四日
The Deserted City And The Wild Ridge III
The tree is silent and a lone bird noises
The flowers are fading and dusk was dim
The withered grass pervades the secludedpavilion
The winding bridge connects the wild ridge
The snow is cold and few people are seen
The wind is high and the clear moon soul
The cold smoke envelops a humble shop
The curved path leads into the deserted city
Note:
First, fourth, sixth and seventh sentences byLv Fuxiang
Second, third, fifth and eighth sentences byLuo Zhihai
Translation by Luo Zhihai

发表于 2021-6-22 23:48:44 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏好诗,有创意,很有特色。

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谢谢临赏,隔屏问好!  详情 回复 发表于 2021-6-23 08:41
发表于 2021-6-23 08:09:53 | 显示全部楼层
向老友致敬!

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谢谢临赏,隔屏问好!  详情 回复 发表于 2021-6-23 08:41
 楼主| 发表于 2021-6-23 08:41:32 | 显示全部楼层
天外高飞 发表于 2021-6-22 23:48
欣赏好诗,有创意,很有特色。

谢谢临赏,隔屏问好!
 楼主| 发表于 2021-6-23 08:41:55 | 显示全部楼层

谢谢临赏,隔屏问好!
发表于 2021-6-23 12:19:01 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏吕兄佳唱。合作愉快!
发表于 2021-6-23 18:04:21 | 显示全部楼层
对联体诗,头一次听说,各处对仗更见精工。欣赏问好绿艾苑先生

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谢谢临赏鼓励,问好诗友,夏日愉快!  详情 回复 发表于 2021-6-24 09:29
 楼主| 发表于 2021-6-24 09:29:55 | 显示全部楼层
小蚂蚁 发表于 2021-6-23 18:04
对联体诗,头一次听说,各处对仗更见精工。欣赏问好绿艾苑先生

谢谢临赏鼓励,问好诗友,夏日愉快!
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